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who the hell am i
to give myself advice
so i cry to you
in a drunken slur
     can i be your wasted time?
     can i be your pointless life?
     come on, let yourself be mine
     or can i fake it for you?
don't worry so much
i just do it for attention
i'll scream at you
in a drunken slur
     can i be your wasted time?
     can i be your pointless life?
     come on, let yourself be mine
     or i'll just fake it for you
©2005-2009 ~akorfisatiger
:iconakorfisatiger:

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it finally feels done. but since i've been toying with part of it for a monthish we'll see.

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:iconnineblind:
very well written,
:clap:

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Ask a ninja: If a ninja could be food, what food would it be?
Ninja: A cream puff. A very deadly cream puff.
:iconakorfisatiger:
thanks

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we'll be quittin' after one more last one

"i decided to breed the two of you together and see what would happen."
:icondarkdove:
i love it, reminds me of green day's 'waiste of time'

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I am not afraid to die I'm not afraid to bleed and #### and fight... Would you be my little cut? Would you be my thousand #####?
:iconakorfisatiger:
thanks. i love greenday... that rocks.

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we'll be quittin' after one more last one

"i decided to breed the two of you together and see what would happen."
:iconiamdrew:
an awesome poem. short, sharp and full of hidden emotion. almost as if the subject is saying, "yeah, i hurt. but it doesn't matter". that feeling just kind of strikes a chord with me. thanks for sharing it. :)
:iconakorfisatiger:
pain shared is halved, joy shared is squared. thanks for the comment and the fav.

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we'll be quittin after one more last one

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