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who the hell am i
to give myself advice
so i cry to you
in a drunken slur
can i be your wasted time?
can i be your pointless life?
come on, let yourself be mine
or can i fake it for you?
don't worry so much
i just do it for attention
i'll scream at you
in a drunken slur
can i be your wasted time?
can i be your pointless life?
come on, let yourself be mine
or i'll just fake it for you
to give myself advice
so i cry to you
in a drunken slur
can i be your wasted time?
can i be your pointless life?
come on, let yourself be mine
or can i fake it for you?
don't worry so much
i just do it for attention
i'll scream at you
in a drunken slur
can i be your wasted time?
can i be your pointless life?
come on, let yourself be mine
or i'll just fake it for you
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it finally feels done. but since i've been toying with part of it for a monthish we'll see.
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an awesome poem. short, sharp and full of hidden emotion. almost as if the subject is saying, "yeah, i hurt. but it doesn't matter". that feeling just kind of strikes a chord with me. thanks for sharing it. 